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Successful résumés contain vivid statements tailored to the advertised position. Experts advise repeating nouns from the job description and using strong action verbs to create effective bullet points that are both parallel and omit the first-person “I.”
Improve the examples below by (a) choosing varied, vivid action verbs to begin each statement and (b) enhancing each statement by providing specifics to illustrate how and/or why the action was important.
EXAMPLE
Weak: Designed engaging materials to support key initiatives
Improved: Designed and produced print and digital materials for three campus campaigns, increasing event participation by 40%
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